Light costume 1

Here! If you're too lazy to go to my deviantart page then here are images of Light's costume trial. Of course I think you'll be able to see it better on my real deviation.

And I would appreciate comments and critiques whether good or bad so that I may finalize a design and colour it. Yeah you should check out the original on my deviantart page cuz I also put in some comments that you should take notice of. The link is here...

http://dark-shadow-light.deviantart.com/art/Light-Clothes-Front-136988908

http://dark-shadow-light.deviantart.com/art/Light-Clothes-Side-136989918

Please Please Please critique cuz I wanna get a concept of Light done before the holidays!